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aeternis (26)in #introduceyourself • 7 years ago
RE: User Introduction: Aeternis
Thanks for the response. While I don't agree that a short story always needs a clean, completely resolved ending, I do realize that the sample size I've posted so far is mostly…
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aeternis (26)in #fiction • 7 years ago
RE: Short Story: Smugglers in Second Class
Oh, you're definitely correct in that instance. I'll fix that one, good catch. I did a general pass through this story after your first comment as well; I fixed a few other things at that time.
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aeternis (26)in #fiction • 7 years ago
RE: Short Story: Smugglers in Second Class
Sorry, six years? I wrote this less than a month ago. Thanks for the feedback; I'll go over it again and see if I can spot any of these issues. Like a lot of my short fiction…
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