Fluted medicine
I am snatches of words overheard
Threaded in whispers through realms.
The moment conceals my birth,
Now, cancels it.
beginningless,
faceless presence
of worldsong and silence,
retreating to infinite nooks,
surging over holographic ramparts:
You travel through me,
loom, ocean of stealth,
You unwrite symbols and
turn color monochrome,
skyloft weaver, sun unseen.
Spinning seasons and erasing them,
Leaving an urn unglazed,
I am an elixir leisurely brewed
For a century in murmurs.
Written by
@d-pend
4/27/18
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Photography by
.1 — "Dawn" by JuhaniViitanen [cropped]
2 — "Dawn" by Carlosthe
3 — "Early Morning" by sunny2011bj
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I like this poem . Life is most important thing and good life is begest gift from the treasure of God
Poems about life Good and photography is very Beautiful my friend will share post @d-pend please check
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Poem Good life story my friend really likes things like this and her photos are very beautiful thank you for sharing @d-pend
Excellent poetry
Thanks for sharing this poem and amazing photo
Wonderful poetry! And photography too.
Resteem and upvote done.
You travel through me,
loom, ocean of stealth,
You unwrite symbols and
turn color monochrome,
skyloft weaver, sun unseen
The imagery level of this verse is legendary, it's like you turning natural around itself by improvising it, I love the paradox of the sun unseen too, quite charming.
it's beyond imagination, it's trully beautiful Daniel
Sublime. It was hard to pick a favourite stanza. But I particularly loved the imagery and wordplay in this one.
beginningless,
faceless presence
of worldsong and silence,
retreating to infinite nooks,
surging over holographic ramparts:
This was a fabulous way to start my day on steemit. Reesteemed to shared the wealth:)
Very good photography @d-pend and his poetry is very meaningful
You just swept me off my feet with your legendary use of words. Once gain, I fu I've it to you @d-pend, you are the real deal.
Nice dvine you always got some nice poetry I see you on steem schools sometimes lol
Well penned. I especially liked these phrases:
of worldsong and silence,
retreating to infinite nooks,
ocean of stealth
Spinning seasons and erasing them,
For a century in murmurs.
Terrific poem (as usual :) and I LOVE the 1st photo!
Excellent! Serene crossing that plunges us into a world of sublime shapes and colors. The senses were ecstatic with the reading of this poem, teacher.
the poem arises extremely splendid images in the head
a magnifiscent combination of metaphors
"faceless presence
of worldsong and silence, has touched me the most!
This is so beautiful. My favorite part was the last one
"Spinning seasons and erasing them,
Leaving an urn unglazed,
I am an elixir leisurely brewed
For a century in murmurs."
Loved it. :)
So many agonyclites in the comment section it is breath taking ...
The fact that everything has a deeper metaphorical in your poems is really great.
Thank you for the elixir @d-pend. Although there is no audio I can hear your voice reading this poem. I think this is the second time I caught you trying to sell this stuff here. I did enjoy the last bottle so much I will take two more. Take me to the world between worlds.
Its so amazing for me, We've often seen sunset, but there is indeed an unusual sunset we see so clearly because the Sun enters slowly. It is also my experience this morning see the sunrise harmony with Mointain. If you dont please come to my post with title the scenery of sunrise. and please correct me to do better nex post.
amazing
fantasssticoo.. ;)