Haiku - Hopeless

in #haiku10 years ago

Black softly beckons

In the vortex who am I

Fearlessness a myth


Depression is a losing battle without weapons. A side effect of our society. And there is something worse than suffering from it. Watching your children facing the battle unprepared, and not having a weapon to hand them.

@onetree

Sort:  

Excellent haiku.
I feel the pain.

Thank you. It's a release.

Your last line reads so well... Fearlessness a myth
The weight of the first word and the wispiness of the next two gives me a feeling of something slipping up and away. Very nicely done. Also, I can relate to the situation you describe. I went through that with a child eight years ago. I hope your situation improves soon.

Thank you @geke some days are tough hey?!