A sunset like a painting, and angsty teenage poetry from 26 years ago :: Daily and Fresh 📷 (213/366)

in #dailyandfresh • 2 months ago (edited)

Hey!

I had to do some errands today, throwing unneeded stuff away, and to the recycling center.

However, I managed to catch a cool sunset this Evening. If it weren't for Miro, I would probably have missed it, and completely forgotten to post the daily photo altogether.

Really looks like a crazy painting.


Click me!

Vera found some old folders of mine today, and from them I found some poems I had written when I was an angsty 18y/o. Most of it was in Finnish, but there was a couple that were in English.

Here's one:

Upon me       dreams,
        i see         hopes.
        
  Celebrating in my drastic thoughts
I'm never in this world, never in
    a day.
    
  Small things,
                make me cry
                
I feel strange, a little hollow,
    living is kind of slow.
I'm forever attracted to my pain,
         always lonely.
        
I      hard               day...
am    so  to          every
 trying    see   street
             every
         
                        -jl-94-

Yeah, it's a bad poem. Almost like written by a teenager.

See ya tomorrow!



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What ever this poem is, it was true express of your emotions what you feel!

Guao que hermosura de cielo @gamer00

Dramatic sunset! That’s quite a nice poem! You should have study arts and become a painter!

We do funny things when we are teens.

One time i wrote the lyrics of an entire album and substituted my boyfriend's name in all the songs ! 😂

I still have a few poems I wrote back then too. They're pretty weird and in a few I actually created new words to make it fit.

It's still fun to look back on from time to time.

I've been thinking about fixing some of my older poems too to make them a bit less awkward. But I fear it might break authenticity, or at worst, my own person. It's like trying to rewrite who I was.

Maybe it's OK . I don't really know.

It's like I never lost that angst after all. Scary thought.

You can keep the original and then write rewrite as you would today. It would be a fun comparison and you don't loose the teen you.

Hmm... I'll be sure to at least give it a try so thanks! 🙂

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