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RE: Hurt- A Broken Soul

Maybe there was a call we never answered but
Didn't see it coming
A pain that came our way
Yet we thought it would be all happy ever after
But along those great and wonderful travels
We learned a lot

The joy of love might last
But the pain emerges from it
The happiest part of relationships might be memorable
But don't forget those memories causes the pain later

We might be broken
Yet there could be a chance
We might be sad
But if we look closely we would see there is someone waiting
Until we are ready to let go of the pain
Love will always await us❤

This is the little I can add to your poem. Loving is the greatest part of life. No matter how broken you might be, just keep living. One day a greater love will come your way for you to tell, the story to the world. Keep loving as you live.
Best regards😊