Ohhhhhhh. What a start to a tale! That first paragraph is just elegant, it sucked me right into the story.
Now I'm looking to the next part of the tale!
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Ohhhhhhh. What a start to a tale! That first paragraph is just elegant, it sucked me right into the story.
Now I'm looking to the next part of the tale!
Greetings and good that you liked it. I think the beginning is the best hook for any good story. Thank you for reading!