Beautiful! The key truly is to let go and surrender; surrender to your imagination, which is in turn creation. Becoming one with all - seeing rainbows in rocks. Unity!
Very nicely written.
The rhythm and pace of the poem, along with the magical imagery, truly make it difficult for even the grimmest of faces to not smile and let go.
That was surely my hope, to capture that feeling that comes over one, if they are open to it, unawares. And to know that this feeling is the only thing of value, the only "thing" that is real. Thanks for stopping by!
The only thing that is of value is ironically not a tangible thing! Once again, you managed to capture the message perfectly! You're welcome!