I must say, your intro is so catchy. You held my attention for a time, in fact as I read through the first paragraph, my mind raced to a date. You did well in your fiction work.
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I must say, your intro is so catchy. You held my attention for a time, in fact as I read through the first paragraph, my mind raced to a date. You did well in your fiction work.