I think it looks fine composition wise, only thing I could think of here is adding a bit more glow to the falling stars and having them reflected on the grass, and maybe bumping the contrast.
Even if you feel it's a bit lacking compared to your current favourite piece, you should still be proud of it as it's still a good job :)
Thank you! ♥
Oh yeah, I totally forgot to have the stars interact with the rest of the piece x_x Maybe next time, when I get back to it I'll remember ^^