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RE: Little things — (original macro photos and poetry)

in GEMS4 years ago

This rocks!! obsidianeously

This poem is exactly what we need on a hot sticky summer day. Our slumps and our successes need to be embraced for what they are, little (but not without significance).

3 Days of Forming and 3 Days of Filling

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But why just one stanza with no paragraph breaks? It's harder for me to read without a little space and dividers, so just wondering.

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Obsidianeously... what a word :-D

Thanks for the blazing hot comment.

But why just one stanza with no paragraph breaks? It's harder for me to read without a little space and dividers, so just wondering.

Good question; I really like the older tradition of writing verse continuously with no line breaks... to be fair, it probably is more cumbersome for readers but emphasizes the poem is one whole, complete thought.