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RE: The Awakening / SCI FI STORY

in GEMS4 years ago

Interesting writing and imagination ;)
I was confused sometimes with the pronouns he/she as to which character was speaking or was it to differentiate the real Leila and the android version ?

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The phrases in italics, are dialogues what the characters express aloud or thoughts.
My native language is Spanish, but I take the opportunity to practice my English and correct my mistakes.
Thanks for commenting !