I see you, afar off,
as a colored python
on green grasses.
yet, luminously enough
to set this triangular space
glimmering as velvet,
in a candle night
Oh! You're music!
That caresses the ears
like a light breeze
on a windy evening.
As Orpheus, you're stringing mad metals
into my bloodstream,
but in a moment;
as the rhythm pilfers
an irregular beat,
that gongs like the devil's voice
on a thundery evening
The way you mince words,
like a tiger,
a tender chunk of lamb,
as reddish juicy oozes off
dripping down the jaw
like a crazed vampire
in translucent night.
A taste of death
resides in you,
a crispy tint of blue,
meshed with Nerium oleander
as endless strawberries
dies in your glittering fangs.
again.. Your smiles fades away
like an orange sunset
fading away in hyperlapse.
And at this moment,
I have begun to hunger for you,
Your scent tingles,
inviting and inciting,
as a ripening citrus tree
on a summer day,
it brings flashes
of monochromic memories,
to the tip of the tongue
and once again I'm reborn
in the wastefulness
of my childhood
I await your reckoning;
a lusty touch
that sends spiral waves
and brings me, my ego and I
crashing into a state of simplicity...
Written by @Josediccus
All sensual themed image Owned and taken by me @josediccus ©
Interested in some more of my works?
DeFi In The Nigerian Space; Controlling Finances You Can Understand?
Understanding Cyclical Responsibility; Making A Case Scenario (3Speak)
Comparing Asians & African Food; What Determines The Unique Eating Habits Of Most Nigerians?
The Stench Of Change (An Original Poetry)
Some Of The Most Unique Things About Schooling & Living In Lagos State Nigeria
My name is @Josediccus, a young Nigerian entrepreneur who is a Vlogger, A Psychologist, Poet, Sports Writer/Analyst & Personal Finance Coach. I'm using my contents as a process to create shared meaning as well as create expressions through which people on/off hive can relate. I believe content is a process to be enjoyed and relished and I'm up for any collaborations in my field stated above. Cheers
@Josediccus, your brother-in-pen & heart
I'm hoping to reach more people who are broken at heart and spirit, so share on any platform or reblog
Nice rhythm bro. You got my mind and thoughts rolling right now.
Hahaha that's the intention, I hoped to sensually explore the sense of whoever comes across this and immediately I think i have managed to do that with you man. It took about 3 hours to put this together man.
Yeah, I know it does take time to come up with such tantalizing stuff. I've done that before while try to integrate it to my art. Sometimes it could take different days to get and gather all ideas.
I've been ready almost all your articles even though I don't comment. You are doing well bro. Weldone.
I feel a call and response like the Song of Solomon... a sensual poem at that :D
Damn.. hahah please humor me. What did you feel reading this piece? What sense came alive? What do you think?
Your content has been voted as a part of Encouragement program. Keep up the good work!
Use Ecency daily to boost your growth on platform!
Vote for Proposal
Delegate HP and earn more
Thank you @ecency
I can't even begin to say how I feel about this poem @josediccus . This is the mind wandering, flowing with ease, allowing itself to be led on a sensuous journey, one which I followed with great anticipation. Truly incredible stuff!
Thank you, it was the intentional, I was trying to awake the five senses and create really powerful images that could tell a story and appeal as well sensually. It took me a long time, about 3 hours of non-stop editing to actually get it right. I'm glad you like it.
Sensuous in a weird sort of way, I wonder what was on your mind when you wrote this, where you just playing with words or there was a theme behind.
Now I am extremely curious LOL.
I love poetry so and this stuff fascinates me.
It was actually themed. Sensuality was the theme and this was how I decided to explore it. I also write Poetry for a long time now so, being expressive and imaginative is my thing, nothing was really going through my mind, I had the urge, I wrote it.
Thanks for satisfying my curiosity.. I know what you mean when you say you had the urge and so you wrote.. poetry can only flow from inspired urges such as those. Lovely.
I like your poem, keep it up bro