You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: I Didn't Mean ToView the full contextfreewritehouse (73)in Freewriters • 8 days ago You described the numbness very well but also the attraction of water. Just the last sentence I wouldn't have said.
Being a hindsight Andy, I didn’t know why I did that. It was just an extreme end to the story, probably should have left it as is, as you suggested. Thank you for the remarks.