5 Minute Freewrite: Wednesday - Prompt: rays of sun

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Luz Borges (@fabielblanchard). Maicillal, 2013)
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Dulce mirada
dulce princesa
tu compañia cura mis tristezas
la mayor de mis bendiciones
parte de mi ser
los rayos del sol
iluminan los días
pero tu sonrisa
ilumina mi vida
chiquita mia
muchachita mía
conserva tu inocencia
no salgas de mis brazos
quédate a mi lado
es absurdo lo que pido
pero hija mia
cuánto te amo.

Tus alas se expanden
los años corren
alzarás el vuelo
hija mía, hija adorada
mi pecho siempre será tu morada.

Sweet look
sweet princess
your company heals my sadness
the greatest of my blessings
part of my being
the rays of the sun
light up the days
but your smile
illuminates my life
my little girl
my little girl
keep your innocence
don't leave my arms
stay by my side
it is absurd what I ask
but my daughter
how much I love you.

Your wings expand
the years are running
you will take flight
my daughter, my adored daughter
my breast will always be your abode.


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A beautiful tribute to your daughter, they grow up to fast. I wish mine were this small again.

Hello my darling, I understand the feelin... we love them so much...

First of all, I upvoted and reblogged this post because though it comes mid length, it evokes a lot of meaning and emotion to the reader.
I'm sure every mother wants her child to grow in the good light, to be graceful and loving in return.
This right here, is a lovely tribute and I hope that your daughter takes your advice and be reassured that you will never leave her. It's a really nice freewrite.

Hello, how are you? thank you very much for your kind and motivating words.

Love is what unites us and will unite us beyond time and distance. I also wish that all the children of the world grow up with love to give love. It would be a more beautiful world.

I'm doing fine and I hope you are too. Indeed love is what connects different hearts. I hope that we all Learn to give love like you said. You're welcome.

Lovely. In English, the repeated 'my little girl' makes it seem like a song the mother is singing to her daughter. I notice in Spanish those lines vary. What does 'muchachita' mean? What is the difference between that and 'chiquita'?

Hello, hello, nice to greet you. I like your visit, thank you for your comments, it motivates me.

You are certainly right, but they are synonyms of the same expression, my little girl.