Acciones y consecuencias.

in Freewriters3 years ago


El joven Jake tiene 16 años, y desde entonces, ha sido muy travieso y con malas actitudes.

Su padre, Marcelo, a decidido dejarlo a rienda suelta, aunque eso suponga sacarlo de la carcel 2 veces a la semana.

Pero para el no es importante, ya que la educación y las materiales, han hecho a un lado lo que realmente debería ser lo principal en la vida del joven.

Marcelo además ya tiene 20 años en la policía, siendo reconocido no por algún mérito honorable, más bien, los escándalos en que participa, lo hacen el ejemplo a seguir de Jake.

Además, su ejemplo de infidelidad se hace notable a simple vista, pues lleva años engañando a Lucia su esposa.

Lucía ya tiene más de 40 años, aún así, se siente como niña.

Desde hace años lleva engañando a Marcelo, quién cree que trabaja por las noches, sin embargo tiene otro derrotero.

Motivada por el rencor y el odio, no hace más que ser otro mal ejemplo para Jake, que a carencia del amor maternal que ésta pueda darle, se a rebuscado en el bajo mundo de las drogas.

Además, pasar tiempo con Jake a sido lo menos importante en su vida, por el contrario, por ahora es más importante su felicidad que incluso su propia familia.

Toda acción tiene consecuencias.

En el bar de la zona se escuchan algunos disparos, al parecer un problema por drogas y dinero a hecho que maleantes se presenten a cobrar a una mujer que les debe una cantidad alta de dinero.

Sin preguntar quién es, un joven de 16 años, saca su revolver y apunta hacía una mujer, la misma que le debe dinero, y pregunta que dónde está el dinero que les pague pronto.

Ésta solo mira hacía abajo, diciendo que no lo tiene pero que pronto lo va a cancelar, que le den tiempo.

2 disparos a quema ropa le ocasionan la muerte inmediata.

Tan pronto salen, las luces de la patrulla fuera del lugar provocan un gran tiroteo.

Marcelo dispara a discreción, aludiendo a su apodo entre compañeros ‘gatillo alegre’.

Uno de los maleantes cesa de disparar, arrojando su arma enfrente de los patrulleros, con la intención de que no lo maten.

Pero eso no le importa a Marcelo, quien solo desea añadir a uno más en su lista de ejecutados.

Boca abajo se encuentra el joven, quien pide a súplicas por su vida, aún así, sin importarle quien sea y con falta de compasión Marcelo se acerca poco a poco y de un solo disparo acaba con otro más de su lista.

Al voltear el cuerpo de la víctima, se en encontró con los ojos verdes de su hijo Jake, quien con poco aliento y con lágrimas, le decía que había sido él, quién disparo a la mujer del lugar.

Vestían de lágrimas los ojos de Marcelo, quien no solo había asesinado a alguien, sino también a su único hijo.

  • Marcelo, tenemos noticias para ti- dijo un subalterno. Tienes que venir al ver el cuerpo de la mujer.

Con pocas fuerzas y en desconsuelo, se encontró con otra noticia.

Al bajar la sábana blanca, vio el cuerpo de Lucia, la mujer con quién había vivido y la madre de su único hijo Jake.

Desconsolado y traumado, Marcelo toma el álbum de recuerdos de los primero años con su familia, dónde se encontraba realmente feliz.

Y recordando a su vez, lo que sus malas decisiones provocaron, perder a su familia en su solo día.

Versión en Ingles.


Young Jake is 16 years old, and since then, he has been very naughty and with bad attitudes.

His father, Marcelo, has decided to let him free rein, even if it means taking him out of jail twice a week.

But for him it is not important, since education and materials have pushed aside what really should be the main thing in the young man's life.

Marcelo also already has 20 years in the police force, being recognized not for any honorable merit, but rather, the scandals in which he participates, make him the example to follow for Jake.

In addition, his example of infidelity is noticeable at first glance, as he has been cheating on his wife Lucia for years.

Lucia is over 40 years old, yet she still feels like a child.

For years she has been cheating on Marcelo, who thinks she works at night, but she has a different path.

Motivated by resentment and hatred, she is just another bad example for Jake, who, lacking the maternal love she can give him, has turned to the underworld of drugs.

Besides, spending time with Jake has been the least important thing in her life, on the contrary, for now her happiness is more important than even her own family.

Every action has consequences.

In the local bar, some gunshots are heard, apparently a drug and money problem has caused thugs to show up to collect from a woman who owes them a large amount of money.

Without asking who it is, a 16 year old young man pulls out his revolver and points it at the woman, the same woman who owes him money, and asks where the money is so he can pay them soon.

She only looks down, saying that she doesn't have it but that she will pay it soon, to give her time.

Two shots fired at close range cause her immediate death.

As soon as they leave, the lights of the patrol car outside the place provoke a big shooting.

Marcelo shoots at will, alluding to his nickname 'trigger happy'.

One of the thugs stops firing, throwing his gun in front of the patrolmen, hoping not to be killed.

But that doesn't matter to Marcelo, who only wants to add one more to his list of the executed.

The young man lies face down, begging for his life, still, without caring who he is and with a lack of compassion Marcelo approaches little by little and with a single shot he finishes off one more on his list.

Turning over the body of the victim, he met the green eyes of his son Jake, who with little breath and tears, told him that it had been him who shot the local woman.

The eyes of Marcelo, who had not only murdered someone, but also his only son, were full of tears.

Marcelo, we have news for you," said a subordinate. You have to come to see the woman's body.
With little strength and in disconsolation, he found another piece of news.

When he lowered the white sheet, he saw the body of Lucia, the woman with whom he had lived and the mother of his only son Jake.

Disconsolate and traumatized, Marcelo picks up the scrapbook of the first years with his family, where he was really happy.

And remembering what his bad decisions caused him to lose his family in just one day.

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