Persist Until You Get It Right || Microfiction Challenge

[kemmyb]

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Hello everyone! This is my entry to the ZapFic Friday Story Challenge that requires participants to tell a complete story in just 50 words. Is it simple? Why not give this challenge a try?

You can participate by clicking here. The prompt for this week's challenge is "persist".

Rules Of The Challenge

• Story must be exactly 50 words
• Story must be posted to the Freewrite community
• Drop a link to your entry in the comment section of the challenge post
• Use tags #freewritehouse and #zapfic.
• Attach a screenshot of your word count in your post.

Here is my short story. I hope you enjoy reading it.

I sighed in annoyance. The dodonkwa snack didn't turn out the way grandmama makes hers.

"So? How was it?" She asked. I showed her a plate of the burnt snack with a scowl.

She clicked her tongue in disapproval. "You must persist until you get it right. Do it again."

Here's the screenshot of the word count...

Comments

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[lisamgentile1961]

Nice! I can be very persistent when I am going after something I really want to do well. What we tend to forget is that they probably didn't get it right the first time either.
!CTP
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[kemmyb]

True. In most cases, we don't succeed after the first try. It usually takes persistence to achieve perfection! Thanks for your comment. !CTP !LADY 🙂

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You're very welcome, @kemmyb! Enjoy your day! 😀

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[lisamgentile1961]

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[jayna]

Well done, @kemmyb. It’s difficult but fun to tell a story in so few words!

[kemmyb]

I agree. After much editing, squashing a story into 50 words is fun! Thanks so much for your visit. ☺️ !LADY !LUV

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