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RE: Freedom, Censorship, & You: The Ultimate Guide (Emma's Dilemma) Pt. 2

in Freewriters3 years ago

Duuuuude! This is epic!

Did you write those lyrics?

Man, it makes dog-life sounds so inviting, lol.

And some killer lines and wordplay. "Jump with the sharks when they cue" hahaaha.

It's just so, the powers that be can certainly try their best to reduce Emma's options, boxing her into a corner, but they may not like the result. :)

And you know what's even crazier? I wrote a rap about this earlier, and you've just inspired me to post it:


Censor-Sheep

[Intro]
Girl you'll never fly high by fit-ing in
Ain't no shine by dullin' light that's built-in
Scared to test bound'ries? That's where life be-gins
Silence is a lesson, social sin

[Chorus]
You can be censored, you can be centered
You can follow the law, up and to the letter
This is still your platform, this the way it must be
If you ain't been through shit, emotions may be rusty
This is not for upvotes, this is not for banknotes
It is to release every word got stuck in their throats
This is for the bullies, this is for the snowflakes
Free 'em from the matrix, breaking stakes for their sake
Toronto reppin' crypto, haters missin' thee boat
Overton is narrow, stoppin' their dinero
Haters could be so great, villains turned heroes
But they stick to blame and ending up a zero
You can be censored, you can be centered
You can follow the law, up and to the letter
Long as this your platform, this the way it must be
"You cannot express, cannot strip, can't be busty!"

[Verse 1]
There's power in every group
There's power if not them, then in you
There's power and influence right here
To get it means getting attention
Leaders must intend their mention
But so many shirk ascension
Avoiding all the dis-sen-sion
Sticking to social convention
I get their fear, apprehension

[Chorus]
You can be censored, you can be centered
You can follow the law, up and to the letter
This is still your platform, this the way it must be
If you ain't been through shit, emotions may be rusty
This is not for upvotes, this is not for banknotes
It is to release every word got stuck in their throats
This is for the bullies, this is for the snowflakes
Free 'em from the matrix, breaking stakes for their sake
Toronto reppin' crypto, haters missin' thee boat
Overton is narrow, stoppin' their dinero
Haters could be so great, villains turned heroes
But they stick to blame and ending up a zero

[Verse 2]
Vinci, bitch, with a new theme
Renaissance man who's good at everything
Avoid ego-minds while they scream so extreme
Teacher kink only way to teach the mainstream
Still I preach hoping they're listening
Explainin' how to raise your reach
And how to spidey-sense twitter impeach
And the best way to help them free their speech
So mind mood, move minds, practice it all

'Cause power will ever exist
In the fist, in the kiss, in the human spirit
No censorships permanent despite powerlessness
You can choose a plot twist whenever you feel pissed, uh
'Cause power will ever exist
In the fist, in the kiss, in the human spirit
Play censor-sheep but gain influence, always persist
Now you seein' shit the clearest.

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Hey very cool you dig the doggy stuff...but, umm, Flame was the author and transmitter ofc. I'm just her pooper-scooper who scribes what is received :P

Very honoured you broke this rap upon the world in a conversation with me....I now kinda get your Eminem refs and I also watched/listened to your 100mph rapping to Godzilla lol. This new number of yours would be great to hear if you get round to it!

I've read through it a few times now, head bobbing back and forward...these are the lines that do it for me:

If you ain't been through shit, emotions may be rusty
This is not for upvotes, this is not for banknotes
It is to release every word got stuck in their throats

Here I laugh:

Teacher kink only way to teach the mainstream

Love the title too 😂 and the intro verse looks like it's all about Overton shattering!....great stuff bro 🙏

Yes, flame transmitting to the scribe. What what was I thinking, lol. :)

Haha, glad you liked my old Eminem practice, I can sing Godzilla from memory now, perhaps I should re-record. :D

This new number is way more chilled out. At least, it is in my head. I've never really recorded any vocals I've written. I have a ghetto mic, a noisy room, and minimal practice... but I guess I could give it a shot, lol.

It'd probably need some rewrites to make it rhyme/flow better too.

ie:

This is not for upvotes, this is not for banknotes
It is to re-lease words that got stuck in their throats
This is for the bullies, for the flakes made of snow
Help 'em become neo of sellin', buyin', and hold

Rhymes better, imho.

Glad you like the title and intro as well. You and @cynshineonline may have just nudged me to record my first actual vocals and turn it into a song. We'll see :) 🙏

OMG i'd love that! You have such a nice voice! ❤️

OMG Yay! I'm soooo happy You posted this @ryzeonline! I love this! The whole thing is epic but my fave line ...

Overton is narrow, stoppin' their dinero

so good!
thanks for sharing it Jay ❤️

My pleasure, and I'm glad if any line resonates strongly with you. 😁