I trade my comfort,
for the comfort of others,
It leaves a sour taste in my mouth,
As I search for what I am lacking,
Humble sounds, that trip me on my way,
I drop upon the soaked earth at the end of each day,
My pockets lined with the crumbs of my dreams.
My hands stained with paint, as I paint my reality.
I stand broken, fragments of me, that shine so brightly,
Creating shadows, over shadowing my insecurities.
Pain radiates through my being,
Reminding me that I am alive,
Living,
Breathing,
Consciously moving,
To ease the burden of my suffering.
I taste the sweet air,
as my chest rises
and falls,
As Everything
turns to dust.
Blinded
I step upon majestic wings
that carry me,
Transform me,
Finally bursting into flames,
As I descend
Deeper and deeper
Into this monumental moment.
Yes I am in pain and yes my thoughts are deep and reflective. When one is stuck in bed, one must seize the opportunity to reflect. To surrender. To see where each moment takes you.
Beautiful piece of work here. I can feel your pain from one who has such a life to another struggling in the same fashion it really hits home with me. Thanks for throwing yourself out there so raw.
Thank you, that means alot coming from you. Xxxx
This poem is loaded with a lot of feeling and is quite heavy, I hope everything gets better soon.
Thank you xxx
A very sincere poem and I identify with you at this time dear, I am also going through a process a little bad and take that paragraph of reference, is where the mind plays many tricks where you are neither good nor bad just existing, but beyond all that we must always hold on to that hope, always remember our dreams and because we are alive, I am one of those who think that there is still a lot to do before leaving this earthly plane, my heartfelt wish is that you recover soon, believe me that when you feel 100% you will be reborn as the Phoenix Bird, hug from afar and lots of strength ♥
Gracias @joseitosanchezs, wishing you all the best xxxx
Amazing poem! I like the way you expressed your subtle point of view. You have a good selection of expressions that complement your thoughts.
And, I wish you a happy trading....
Thanks @chrysanthemum xxx
This a powerful message and a truth many people always shy away from. Reflection when we are done gives an insight to how far we have come and every other thing about life.
How are you doing? Please take care of yourself
Thank you George. I am doing a bit better today, I have learnt more about the root of my pain and that is good. I hope you are well xxxx
I am good, and just read about your encounter with the healer. Happy to know you are getting better.
Happy weekend to you and the girls.
Very nice, your poem is full of your feelings and purest experiences, very nostalgic, it makes us reflect, a big hug and blessings.
Many thanks xxx
I picked every line like I was savouring fruit. Every line flowed into the next for me to create such a visual and emotional mix of needs and hopes and dreams, and pain and fear and bliss. Beautiful!🌺
Such beautiful words, thank you @jhymi xxxx
I'd love to hear this in spoken word. In your voice!
I'm sorry I've been so distant. So much going on here too.
Not sure why you're stuck in bed but that can't be easy trying to take care of and educate two little beings alone. :(
Do you have support to help right now?
Circling back to find out what happened.... 👣
Hello lovely, that's okay. I seem to have less and less time to spend on here. My life is very full right now snd I have had a breakthrough. Love to you xxxx
Coming to read you. No need to reply. Xxx
Beautiful
💚
Your verses express the melancholy and darkness that invade us at times of life, but at one point the light of hope is found on the horizon.
Such beautiful verses made with feeling.
Thanks for sharing.
Good day.
Thank you @rinconpoetico7 xxx
The opening line says it all. The sacrifice and pain one endures for the sake of others leaves us broken and wanting.
It does indeed. Thanks @dwixer xxx
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Love to you Vincent xxxxxx
Wow! That kept me enthralled the whole time. It got better and sadder for me as it went along. Good luck in getting rid of your pain and living the life you want to live.
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