Kickman 31x31

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Chapter 31 "Injustice!" page 30 and 31

by Matt S. Law, Esq.

Last page, I wrote a whole thing about how I was undecided about how to conclude the final panel of the comic. And I included some alternate endings. So think of this as a supplemental post.

Per one of my reader's recommendations I am changing the last page of Kickman to this version, with a silent Angelina standing in front of the rubble as the sun goes down. So this is the updated Kickman page 30...

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Followed by a slow, sad, dramatic monologue on Page 31...

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So, no new things happening here. I just added some dramatic pauses to take advantage of the comic medium. Since I only post one page a week, I usually end up packing way more dialog into each page than modern comics do. Certainly more than Manga pages.

Also, there is still a new page coming out tomorrow. Doing this took very little time. Actually it was super easy, barely an inconvenience.

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It is quite touching. Comics can have more emotional depth than some people appreciate.

It's all abut the dramatic pause. Like someone said, "Music is the space between the notes."