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The Over-Emphasis on Hair and Fashion as Character Traits
Intertwined in battles and plotlines are frequent references to characters' hairstyles and appearance changes—particularly absurd in a universe that once portrayed Jedi as monks and warriors. The reviewer points out the pointless, superficial focus on haircuts and fashion, dismissing it as pandering designed for superficial appeal rather than narrative purpose.
Incoherent Character Dialogues and Expositional Clutter
Dialogue often sounds forced and awkward, with characters revealing their motives through muddled and contradictory lines. For instance, characters mindlessly repeat nonsensical themes like "freedom" or "power" without exploring what these truly mean in context, which further clouds the narrative.