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RE: Peter and Paul

in The Ink Well3 years ago (edited)

You shouldn't scare me like that :)

I figured it would be alright but you really know how to pump the adrenaline in your readers. This is a sweet story, and an action story. The way you go from calm to panic in almost an instant is very effective. One of the talents you show in writing is energy. You drive a story forward at a clip so that the reader is swept along.

As always, a very good read, @bruno-kema.

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Thank you @agmoore, i always love reading your comments because it reminds me that i'm doing something right. I'll keep learning and improving. And i'm glad you enjoy my stories.