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RE: Urbertā€™s Flight

in The Ink Well ā€¢ last year

As I was reading this paragraph below, the song Ghost - Call Me Little Sunshine came to my mind and suddenly the rest of the story changed šŸ˜šŸ˜

A cloud seemed to burst overhead. The world darkened, and the rain... the rain was accompanied by distraught outbursts of pain that lit up his vista with jagged bolts of sizzling fire. The heavens screamed out in agonizing drumrolls that forced him to plug his ears with his fingers.

I really liked the feeling of your story. It would be epic if it was animated. Congratulations. šŸ˜±

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Animation would be awesome, but itā€™s only a ā€œlittleā€ story. Haha
Thanks for reading