theinkwell poetry challenge | A sad song

in The Ink Well4 years ago (edited)

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It was our song


It was our tune
We partied and laughed to it
Drank till we were sky high
It was our song
But the day came
The doom clouds overed around
The darkness rained
And the storm took you away
Our song never felt the same
It reminded me of time lost forever
I will never feel the same
It was a good song
It was our happy song
It is a sad song


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It's a sad song thay brings back memories that hurt

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Oh! Fixed 😅

That's a tough situation. Every time the song comes on, it makes others happy, but this person sad.

Yes it is indeed. It's sad

The image of the song as the centre of the poetic emotion works very well, to which are added the images of the sky, related to mobility: the sound that ascends, as well as the darkness that descends. Sense poem, @dele02.

Thank you