Greetings, @gilliatt
I recognise in your writing a descriptive skill that I think would make you capable of tackling interesting themes. In this text you use it to describe sexist thoughts and a certain indisposition, or disinterest, of the character to distinguish between good and evil.
Greetings, it is a character that I am creating, but I wanted to keep it that way, selflessly perverse ... I hope to develop it better. Thanks for reading me