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RE: Love and Rails: The Inkwell Fiction Prompt #14/ Railroads

in The Ink Well5 years ago

This story felt very real to me, @bruno-kema. I could imagine this couple, falling deeply in love with one another even though they had never met face to face. In fact I have a relative who had a similar experience! This story is well told, leading us along in anticipation of that moment of meeting. It could just as well have gone badly! So the relief is palpable when their actual first encounter is everything the narrator could have hoped for.

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 5 years ago  

Hello @jayna
As bad as the world can be, it's a good thing that some things can still go according to how we would love them to.
Thank you for reading, i'm glad you like the story.