Great job with this horror story, @bruno-kema! The suspense is wonderful, and of the ghost is absolutely terrific. And you resolved it well in the end with a really good explanation of what's haunting the house. Wow those are some brave kids!
There are some great lines in this story, like this:
Soon after, they stopped before a bungalow. The building was shrouded in darkness, the light of the moon didn’t seem to be touching it. As no one alive was living there, there was no sign of humans.
Well done!
Thank you very much @jayna, I was looking to write a mix of mystery and horror. I'm glad I was able to achieve that.
I'm glad you enjoyed the story.