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RE: Rainfall

in The Ink Well5 years ago

Very interesting how you tie the past and the present together through the encounter with the child. I loved that part of your story. Though it was sad to read about the child's loss, it was so touching how he wanted to find his way to heaven to check on his father.

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Yes, because once in his life he thought of it as well. The writer felt the same so he decided to add up a scene like that.

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