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RE: Railroad (the inkwell prompt #14)

in The Ink Welllast year

That's such an interesting story line, - how the mother brings the father and son together from beyond the grave. I was a little bit confused by who Jeric was talking to when he got off the train. It seemed like it was the mother, but then it was the father. But other that bit of confusion, it's a very good story!