The wicked king

in The Ink Well2 months ago

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Once upon a time, in a far-off kingdom, there lived a wicked king who was feared and hated by all his subjects. He was a cruel and ruthless ruler, who believed that might was right and that the only thing that mattered was his own power and glory.

The king had an army of fierce warriors at his command, and he would send them out to conquer neighboring lands, taking whatever he wanted and killing anyone who dared to stand in his way. He was also a master of dark magic, and would use it to keep his enemies in check, summoning demons and other terrible creatures to do his bidding.

Despite the king's many atrocities, there was one thing that he could not control: his own son, the prince. The prince was kind and just, and unlike his father, he cared deeply for the well-being of his people. He knew that his father's rule was unjust and that something needed to be done to stop him.

So the prince set out to gather a group of brave warriors and other allies, determined to overthrow the wicked king and restore peace to the kingdom. They traveled far and wide, facing many dangers and overcoming many obstacles along the way.

Finally, they were ready to face the king in a final, decisive battle. The king's army was strong, but the prince and his companions fought bravely and with great skill. In the end, they were victorious, and the king was defeated.

With the king gone, the prince took his place on the throne and ruled justly and fairly, bringing prosperity and happiness to the kingdom once more. And so, the wicked king's reign of terror was finally brought to an end, and the people lived in peace and contentment once more.


This is a pleasant story, where we are relieved to find that good has triumphed! It is very interesting that the King was overthrown by his own son! Your tale fills me with curiosity. Does the king himself practice black magic, or does he have a mysterious court wizard? What led his son to be so different in the first place, and how did he gather his allies? It can be so much fun to fill in these details!

The Ink Well has a wonderful Catalog of Fiction Writing Tips, which offer many insights into how we can fill in these gaps. I hope you continue to explore your enjoyment of fantasy tales! Thank you for contributing, please remember to engage with the work of other writers in the community as well. 😁

Your story has the makings of great legends, @kisswisdom! We appreciate your effort to write and share it. However, we would like to suggest that you comply with the community rules: The Ink Well community home page We expect our writers to make an effort to create original stories, with a good development of plot, settings and characters. By this we mean that we privilege quality over quantity. A better crafted story will reap better rewards. Thanks again for your presence. We hope to read you again soon.

Alright I will do better next time..thanks for the suggestions..

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