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This is a pleasant story, where we are relieved to find that good has triumphed! It is very interesting that the King was overthrown by his own son! Your tale fills me with curiosity. Does the king himself practice black magic, or does he have a mysterious court wizard? What led his son to be so different in the first place, and how did he gather his allies? It can be so much fun to fill in these details!

The Ink Well has a wonderful Catalog of Fiction Writing Tips, which offer many insights into how we can fill in these gaps. I hope you continue to explore your enjoyment of fantasy tales! Thank you for contributing, please remember to engage with the work of other writers in the community as well. 😁

Your story has the makings of great legends, @kisswisdom! We appreciate your effort to write and share it. However, we would like to suggest that you comply with the community rules: The Ink Well community home page We expect our writers to make an effort to create original stories, with a good development of plot, settings and characters. By this we mean that we privilege quality over quantity. A better crafted story will reap better rewards. Thanks again for your presence. We hope to read you again soon.

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