Wow, this was actually a quite catching story!
I was so deep in the story while reading it. When @empress6 says that this could be turned into a movie, they are absolutely right! While reading I had a short movie laid out in my head perfectly.
Keep on writing! I would also be interested in a part 2 of this story. What happens next? Perhaps the neighbour that warned is now free again and only one person is a captive at a time? But even if you leave the story as is and proceed to another story, I'm looking forward to anything you may write, as it seems to be set to be a catching story!
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