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RE: 30 Days Writing challenge : Day Ten— Write a poem about family.

in The Ink Well4 years ago

Life gives in: drinks, taste, sate,
Connects, branches into tributaries,
Inlets & life lives within

I love this.

Family is eternity between
Tongue & teeth

And this!

Actually, so many elements, this is a beautiful poem.

Good to hear from you, appreciate the challenges of a job :)

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Thank you @shanibeer.i am glad you find beauty within the poem. You are right, I will appreciate the challenges of a job, considering how long I have been out of work. Thank you

I meant that I appreciated the challenges of a job and how it affects writing time 😀

Indeed. I try but I'm but flesh and blood. 😂