Elegantly handled layering of suspense and terror. You take us on a chaotic journey into the mind of a woman traumatized by the sudden demise of her fiancé. As the tale unfolds we hold our breath, hoping that there’ll be an innocuous reason for the chaos, but, instead, you give us a harsh reality - reality is often so much scarier than fantasy. Nicely done.
Thank you for engaging with other writers in the community
Thank you so much for appreciating my story. ^_^