The way you build tension with this piece is masterful. We’re just dying to know what the glow under the floorboard is. Apart from the engrossing suspense you embroider the scene with such detail that you seem to “sew” it onto our consciousness;quite brilliant technique. The final line takes us by surprise and resolves the piece with subtle, though devastating, “punch”.
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