This is really interesting and compelling story, @kristabel123. But we must ask — why have you left off the period at the end of almost every paragraph? Be sure to take care of details like that when you edit your stories, as untended errors affect the level of curation.
We enjoy your writing and hope this is a helpful tip.
Thank you so much @theinkwell for such nice review and feedback. Absolutely, I'll pay more attention to punctuation and small details the next time i edit. Thanks again for the encouragement