This is a very nice story. It delivers an interesting, believable character. The discovery of the ever-crucial seed words is cleverly described. We hope that Liam is careful around the pigs (nice bit of local color there) and that he is more cheerful now that the secret to the inheritance has been unlocked.
Thank you for sharing this story with the Ink Well community. We appreciate that you engage with other writers.
Thank you so much, I haven't heard the term local color before, I just Googled it : )