Nicely done. You have humor. And irony. You have personality, and story arc. You certainly have setting. All in all, you have a good story, a pleasure to read.
Thank you for sharing this 'green' story with us. We very much appreciate that you support other writers. Comments are extremely encouraging.
Yes, I might have gone a bit overboard in my comments yesterday. ha ha I've been away from the ink well for too long, and I decided to come back with a bang. 😅 I'm very happy to see that writing yesterday seems to have triggered another entry for today. I hope that it will be another welcomed read for you.