The Ink Well Prompt #85 - Plus Weekly Challenge and Prize Announcement

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Hello and welcome to the The Ink Well weekly fiction prompt and prize announcement! The Ink Well is a Hive blockchain-based social media community of creative writers. If you love to write short stories, we invite you to join us. Or peruse the work of our community members.

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  • Your story has many grammatical errors. (This is easily fixed with the tips in our post, Help for the Grammatically Challenged.)
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Important tips!

  • Among the factors we look at is quality of engagement with others in the community
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Weekly Challenge and Prize Announcement

Time for the prize announcement and new challenge!

Last week's prompt was foil and the skill challenge was to show, don't tell. This community really came through with many surprising, amazing stories!

Many of our writers created original, memorable stories in response to 'foil'. Our selections of this week's winners and honorable mentions reflect how well writers dealt with this prompt and skill challenge.

Update! We are excited to share that in addition to our first place winner, we are awarding a second and third place, in addition to a few honorable mentions. For second and third place we are awarding Hive Basic Income (HBI). The third place winner receives 2 HBI and the second place winner receives 3 HBI.

Here are this week's honorable mentions, all of them written in response to the prompt and skill challenge.

Honorable Mentions

That summer, my parents made me go to summer camp so my chocolate brown skin could be illuminated by sunlight and not the HD TV screen.
Next thing I knew I was off the camp bus and slapping the air, trying to survive a scourge of mosquitoes.

After a long while of staring and thinking, she decided to stall some more by going to shower, she figured out that if anything bad were to happen to her, she would rather be smelling like peaches than the donuts from her temp job.

How did I find myself at the town's square and likely to be devoured by a gigantic predator? Fate had a way of making the very things we fear come to life. Our king and his governors had become so corrupt that the people were crying out for relief and vengeance daily. The little people could scrape together from their harvests and crafts work were sold and paid as taxes to the king through his governors.

The Bermuda grass carpeting the entire garden served as my trampoline—my guardian angel who caught me during my fall, unlike my crush who didn’t catch me when I fell in love with her. Such a silly thought about unreciprocated feelings.

Sitting at the restaurant by herself, the voice was starting to feel agitated, and the breadbasket was nearly empty – as was her stomach. And, as couples came and ate and laughed and went, she realised she was alone. She breathed out and felt a sense of relief which physical showed in her relaxed shoulders. The woman’s name was Tina, but ever since a young age, she’d been known as Tin. Imagine, she thought, what her driver’s licence one day might read: Tin-foil. She went home that night, happily alone, as Allan sat on his bed looking at the darkness beyond his window.

Third Place: Wins 2 HBI

"How does it feel?" She echoed my question with a kind of sarcastic sad laugh. "It hurts, it's like when you put your faith in someone that they'll be there for you then they just step out of the way like they never said anything, It's like when someone carried you so high into the air just to throw you back down, it's like you're drowning but you like the feel of the water so you keep drowning still." She said all that in one breath and was gasping for air her eyes red. I just stood there regretting and silently rebuking my curiosity.

Second Place: Wins 3 HBI

His pink lips highlighted the black beards behind them, and the side beards were a tiny strip of hair running from the head to the chin. Tega realized she must have been looking at him for a while now and moved her face away only to be called back when he started talking.

And the winner of the foil/show don't tell challenge is... @grindan with the story You Can't Foil the Magic of Coffee. Congratulations, @grindan. You will receive 5 Hive!

Charlie's hands shake as she wraps the steaming breakfast sandwich in an embossed sheet of foil. The capability of violence pounds in her veins as Brett continues. "I don't know whose idea it was to put the trash can there, but it makes so much more sense here! So I fixed it, also..." Charlie begins to hum, it's stupid and it doesn't help. So, she does it louder. Brett scrunches his little gremlin face up in annoyance "We should talk about sani buckets..."

Okay, let's review fiction entries from last week's prompt and launch a new one.

Stories From the Previous Week

@ipexito
@fantom22
@mrenglish
@marynn
@george-dee
@royaldiadem
@bahnhoft
@lordtimoty
@zeraton
@merit.ahama
@grindan
@kemmyb
@restcity
@balikis95
@iyimoga
@littlepiggies
@cool08
@madamnaomi
@temileke
@diikaan
@idlemind
@popurri
@buezor
@abigail04
@wrestlingdesires
@itsostylish
@khaleesii

Thank you to everyone who posted a story for last week's prompt!

This Week’s Prompt

The Ink Well is fortunate to have many members who are eager to write. However, the curation team does not have infinite resources. In order to be fair to all writers, we have decided to ask our members to publish only one story per week. If members choose to publish more than that, they may. However, only one story will be curated.

It would be wise to use talent on the best story you can write so you can receive the optimal curation. Remember, Quality over Quantity. Moving forward the Ink Well Team believes this will provide a better experience for writers and curators.

At last, the prompt of the week!
This week's prompt is I can't believe you said that! Our skill challenge will be to use dialog in the story.This week's prompt and skill challenge go together easily. You don't have to use the exact words of the prompt. Derive inspiration from it.

@jayna discusses using dialogue in her essay, Action, Dialog and Narrative, the Dynamic Trio. Here is anothen essay, from Masterclass, that offers tips on how to format dialog.

To jump start your story, we offer a few examples here of how the prompt/skill challenge might be used:

  1. Mary is going to get fired. She told the boss, "I don't like it here."

  2. Andrew jumped from his seat and screamed at the bug, "You bit me!"

  3. Making friends is not Darlene's strong suit. She is likely to say to people's faces, "You smell."

  4. Everyone fell silent when Eric announced, "I'm not really human."

  5. Did you hear what Martina said? She came right out and said it, "I stole the jewelry."

These are just some ideas of ways in which the prompt might inspire a story. You can probably come up with much more interesting ideas of your own.

A week from now, we will select a winning story that demonstrates this skill and utilizes the prompt. Of course we will also be looking for overall quality in the winning story. Good luck!

Note: As always, please avoid violent, gory, bloody, brutal, sexist or racist themes and language, erotica and other NSFW (not safe for work) content, and stories featuring abuse of women, children or animals. (We have a complete article about The Ink Well stance on violence and brutality for more information.)

If you don't feel inspired by this prompt or the featured image, feel free to peruse any of our past prompts or our collection of idea-generators:

Weekly Prompt Rules:

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  4. COMMUNITY SUPPORT: Visit the work of at least two other community members and comment on their work.
  5. Title: The title is up to you. You can come up with any title you wish. You do not need to name it after the prompt or include the prompt word.
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  7. Length: We request that story word counts are a maximum of 1,500 words maximum length (preferably 750-1000 words). This is just a guideline. Longer stories are okay too, but they tend to get fewer readers. Additionally, The Ink Well admins appreciate keeping to that maximum story length for our time management. Thank you!

Reminder: Be sure to also read our community rules. The reason for the repeat reminder is that we see many stories describing brutality of women, children, or animals, or that have excessive gore or violence, and we must mute them. Please do not post these stories in The Ink Well. We want our community to be a safe and comfortable place for all readers.

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Wow.... As always, congrats to the winners and to the honorable mentions. It's not easy to write but these ones made it through.

I will get the shoe shining in this prompt...

Looking forward to reading your story, @cool08, as I always do :)

I am so happy to be an honorable mention, thank you so much

A well deserved honor, @khaleesii. Looking forward to reading your story this week.

Thank you so much

congratulations to the winners @buezor @seki1 and @grindan and honourable mentions.

Thank you 😁

Last week was full of amazing thoughts and great stories. Congratulations to the winners.
We move on to the next.
"I can't believe you said that" will make it a more amazing week.

I'm glad you're inspired, @mrenglish. You always have something interesting to say in your stories. Always worth reading :)

Thanks for the compliment. I am looking forward to my next piece and hoping it catches attention and meet up with this week challenge.

Hey, I have missed a lot! Anyway, congratulations to @grindan. I wish you more success in the coming contests. I also greet other contestants in this great community for the well-done job, we are going to the promised land.

Thank you very much 😁

Wow thanks for the prize. It's always a pleasure writing and seeing the prompts. Congrats to all the winners 🤗

Congratulations to all winners and honorable mentions. How nice!


The rewards earned on this comment will go directly to the people( @agmoore ) sharing the post on Twitter as long as they are registered with @poshtoken. Sign up at https://hiveposh.com.

Congratulations @grindan 😇😇... Well deserved, congratulations to the winners too. Let's keep the love going guys😘😘😘.

Congratulations to all winners and honorable mentions! We are so proud of you and your wonderful work!

Congratulations to all winners and honourable mentions, also a big heart to everyone that participated last week. Thank you @theinkwell for the recognition, and thanks everyone for the support in reading, correcting and criticizing my stories. Cheers to a more great week ahead.

Thank you for all of the work you do to bring these wonderful contests to Hive every week @theinkwell team! I am beyond thrilled to have come in at first this week, this community is such an inspiration to me!! 😁❤️

Great job to everyone this week, I had so much fun reading through your posts! I can't wait to see what everyone does with this week's prompt/skill challenge!

Congratulations to all the winners. Thank you for all the wonderful stories 💕❤️🤗❤️❤️💕❤️🤗🤗

Congratulations to all the winners and honorable mentions.

This week's prompt seems promising. :)

My entry on this week contest, and also my first time posting here
https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@kingsleymark/dark-past
My comment on @wrestlingdesires and @khaleesii

Here is my entry to the 85th prompt.
https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@mrenglish/in-love-with-my-boss
I have commented on the works of the following writers:
@george-dee & @treasure-joshua

Congratulations to all the winners. This weeks prompt is quite interesting. Hmn 🤔

Hey Ink Well;
Thanks again for the prompt - and for making it a lot easier than last week too! This week I had the pleasure of popping on to MrEnglish and Fantom22. I havn't visited their entries in a while, but was glad to find some familar faces.

And here's my entry for this week:
https://peakd.com/@lordtimoty/theinkwell-a-story-about-eddie-his-garden-gnome-and-a-chook

What a fun challenge 🙌Thanks so much for the awesome prompt, and everything else ♥️

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Congrats to the winners you guys are wonderful
Here is my link to my post
https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@billionz/

Hello, my dear friends. This is my entry for this week's prompt 👇👉🏿
https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@raymondpeter/loyalty-is-good-the-inkwell-prompt-85
I have dropped my comments on the posts on these people's posts:

Here is my submission for this week's prompt 😁

https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@grindan/dont-stop-believing

Congratulations to the winners of the previous Contest especially @idlemind .... Your names swings a little different when I read your work....
I'm happy I made it just in time for this week's contest..can't wait to read some finely tuned work of art.🔥

@bornben thank you for reading my work. I wasn't expecting the special mention though 😊

This might not fully fit into the prompt for this week. But here my little contribution;

Syringe

Congratulations to everyone winning and writing. 🎉🎉🎉👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿

https://hive.blog/hive-170798/@emeka002/weird-city

This is my very late entry to the prompt

Not that late :) Glad to have it.

I participated last week, and I made sure to follow all the rules, but seems like my entry was passed over.

Here's the link below for proof. Not that it matters anymore
https://hive.blog/hive-170798/@talon12/a-closure-that-tears

I have missd my chance to participate this week. Saw this post quite late. So, I anticipate the new week

Here is my entry for this week's prompt.

https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@buezor/inkwell-prompt-strange-companions

Made comments on posts by @lightpen and @madamnaomi

Here's my submission for the prompt, thanks so much for everything :) ...

https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@wrestlingdesires/loyalty-love-and-the-unexpected

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Hello, @theinkwell. Here's my story for this prompt--

https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@kemmyb/say-you-love-me-or-i-run-away-fiction

Comments--
-Littlepiggies
-Stellageorge
-Wrestlingdesires

Good evening. This is my entry for this week's prompt, sorry it's a bit last-minute 😂🍁

https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@seki1/confidence-is-a-tool

Hello everyone, my entry to this week; https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@khaleesii/the-misunderstanding, Thank you.

Also I have engaged with other authors.