Good story. Am glad he was able to balance his desires and its didn't get to affects his home. Your story writing skills is cool and impressive. I enjoyed reading, although there wasn't much details about how he meant his wife, how he became a successful man or what happened to his mother and siblings. Truly story writing takes steps to follow and am sure you are getting it already.
Great job bruh. Keep writing ❤
Thanks for the correction, I have noted them down and will do better next time.