Oh, I see, so she was not a real woman but a ghost! Thank god she let them go unharmed or maybe she was not a bad soul. I have no trust in ghosts but when I read stories like these, I think of Alfred Hitchcock.
Great spooky tale. I like the imagery because it's subtle and feels like normal everyday life, but little by little, you build the tension until the scary revelation at the end.
The characters in a bid to find their way home found their way to a haunted house and met a ghost! What a nocturnal adventure! At least they got home to their wives and lived to tell the tale the following day! 😄
You did great with this story. Well done, @ubani1! 🙂
Ahh @urbani1, you captivated me with this tale! I've read enough stories now to know that most of the time when a person or group of people leave a party after a good time and head off into the night that I anticipate something going sideways. You painted such a glorious haunted Spanish house scene, and I loved how you ended things with your protagonists getting some validation and their pants scared off. Nicely done:)
stories about bad souls will give us a deep impression for those who believe in ghosts.
But beyond that, we all have to look at it from a positive perspective. And we can take lessons from this story.
Good Story!
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Shivers right now. Not a fan of horror but I enjoyed this.
Good story, catches the reader and leaves him wanting to continue, well narrated and carried and with an extraordinary ending.
Oh, I see, so she was not a real woman but a ghost! Thank god she let them go unharmed or maybe she was not a bad soul. I have no trust in ghosts but when I read stories like these, I think of Alfred Hitchcock.
You work the prompt into the story beautifully, @ubani1. The atmosphere in the story is strong and characters are believable.
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Whew...
Ghosts and haunted houses...
Imagine their shock.😁
This is a beautiful story bro, keep it up.👍
We must all, at some point, write a ghost story, @ubani1.
Very fun and creepy story, @ubani1!
Great spooky tale. I like the imagery because it's subtle and feels like normal everyday life, but little by little, you build the tension until the scary revelation at the end.
Ghosts are scary. Though the story carried the idea of bringing it looks like it's a kind of real.
Nice piece.
What a captivating, horror story!
The characters in a bid to find their way home found their way to a haunted house and met a ghost! What a nocturnal adventure! At least they got home to their wives and lived to tell the tale the following day! 😄
You did great with this story. Well done, @ubani1! 🙂
Ahh @urbani1, you captivated me with this tale! I've read enough stories now to know that most of the time when a person or group of people leave a party after a good time and head off into the night that I anticipate something going sideways. You painted such a glorious haunted Spanish house scene, and I loved how you ended things with your protagonists getting some validation and their pants scared off. Nicely done:)
Wow, I was really scared for them when they decided to go back, luckily they came out unharmed. Nice story bro.
stories about bad souls will give us a deep impression for those who believe in ghosts.
But beyond that, we all have to look at it from a positive perspective. And we can take lessons from this story.
Good Story!
Great story but a bit scary though.
What an awesome story!!! That little old lady sure has a lot more power than she lets on 😂
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