Wow! This kinda knocked me for a six - - that's quite powerful! Are you saying this is an entry as a comment?
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Wow! This kinda knocked me for a six - - that's quite powerful! Are you saying this is an entry as a comment?
Well it's to short for a post i thought , and it did come up writing the comment . Saw some of the poems and thought , com on people , why put so mush personal emotion in it , it blurs the setting that the poem was made to express . Wipe your eyes from tears before you try . So in that light , Not funny , fit's me as a comment ;-) .
Then again , i wrote it , but i was inspired by a master that i just before i wrote it had listened to .
Did i copy ? i don't know for sure , I found this sword but i am blindfolded chopping in the dark . Like a monkey that was given a typewriter . Law , a poem from Bukowski was my base , ill put it up for comparing .
Can it enter the challenge true a comment ? Would not mind that , for i have no artworks to make it in a post right now , and have no others to tag .
And i might say i am a bit shy when it comes to challenges on Hive .
Do as you please , for poems are written to share :-)
Of course, I'll share! Bukowski was a master.
I guess there's different poetry for different folks. I do prefer the more subtley done, and less 'emotional' - yet they should still hit you in some way.
There's so many poems I adore, but for some reason, this one always stuck with me. It taught me there is poetry even in the seemingly mundane.