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RE: Cyber Pirates versus Werewolf Ninjas | Logiczombie Contest | Oivas’ Fourth Entry

in OCD4 years ago

He wasn't sure how these people could be happy. It was as if they were born with that innate skill or maybe having accomplished everything they were pleased.

I like how you immediately flesh-out the main character and name them. And then you keep your framework simple by only using two named characters.

So, the government here forms the Cyber Pirates who's mere presence makes most believe that it is their job to ensure peoples' well-being. Shane, on the other hand, was the Werewolf Ninjas, who took matters into his own hands, albeit, for the wrong reasons (protests). Arnold comes in like a breath of fresh air and fills in the void that required a Logiczombie.

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That's a close observation, @logiczombie.. I had fun writing those stories and realized all four of them could easily fit in three different genres.. 😃

Great work.