Sintiendo (poema) | Feeling (poem)

[josemalavem]

_{Pintura de Rita Miranda Fuente / Source}

Estuve mirando hondo
estuve escuchando largo
desde este punto dilatado
el día que declinaba

Cómo sonaban afuera
los azares recios del transcurrir
y cómo eran eco en mi sorpresa
latente conmovida

Trataba de mirar y escuchar
y solo me oía y veía
Algo se hacía azar
y eco en mí
Declinaba
algo de mí se iba

I've been looking deep
I've been listening long
from this dilated point
the declining day

How they sounded outside
the harsh vagaries of the passing
and how they echoed in my surprise
latent moved

I tried to look and listen
and I only heard and saw myself
Something became random
and echo in me
I was declining
something of me was leaving

Gracias por su lectura. Thank you for reading.

_{Gif diseñado por @equipodelta}

Comments

[nancybriti]

Ese final que lo dice todo... ¿Es este tiempo detenido el que nos hace caracol? O ya lo éramos? Mucho antes de esta vida, éramos esto. Como un eco, tu poema, @josemalavem. Abrazos

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