It's half past twelve of night. I don't know why i am not getting sleep. I am feeling like someone is waiting for me.It's a feeling like an attraction of heart which is saying that someone is remembering about me or calling me. I can't sleep with this feeling so went outside with a view to spent some time in the bench which is in front of the lake.
After reaching there i saw rohita waiting for me on the bench. I cant tell you what i was feeling. I was like that my love towards her has draw me to her. Our hearts are connected that's why i was getting so much strong feeling of her. I rushed to her and sat beside her. She is quite. I started talking to her. In this midnight spending some time with your loved ones,talking on and on in front of a lake is really an amazing moment. The pin drop silence everywhere is letting me feel my heart beats too as they are pumping in a way faster then before. Suddenly she stand up and left the place. I couldn’t figure out why did she leave. Did i say anything that offended her? Well, i will ask for her forgiveness next time we meet. I came back to my bed and went to sleep for that night.
Few days later, again i am getting the same feeling as someone is remembering me with full heart. It was like someone is waiting for me which isn’t allowing me to sleep. Again i went outside and saw that rohita is waiting for me at the same bench. Everything changed around me. I was like she is here, my love. I sat there and started talking. She is smiling. Her eyes, her smile and her long hairs which is moving a little bit with the breeze is well enough to make me crazy. It started raining and we are still there. I knew she likes rain, so we were just sitting there and enjoying the rain.Suddenly she stood up and started walking. She is going through the darkness and as soon as i could go behind her my leg slipped and i fall on the lake water. I was drowning and even i wasn’t moving my hand or leg for coming up i was feeling like i am going behind her and she is taking my away through the lake.
Next day when i woke up i saw everyone standing around me. My elder brother is asking about why i keep sitting in that bench every night. What happened last night that i fall from the lake? He did save me somehow seeing me drowning there. I was perplexed.
I just replied, "I was talking with rohita and when did i fall on the lake? I just had an conversation with her and came back to sleep."
I heard my mom is shouting and crying while saying, "Your wife rohita is dead by drowning on that lake. For God's sake stop doing this kind of things my son. I don't wanna lose you."
I am still confused why my mom is saying that.Rohita is alive she meets me every night in that bench where we spent our most lovely moments. Mom is gone mad or thinking that i am mad? Still i am confused. I think of discussing this to rohita but everytime i go to her i forget everything and get intoxicate to her. What's that? Whatever it is i love to be with her.
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What a timing, bro!
mil ase bolte hobe... ;)
Hehehe, majhrat likha likhir best time...btw likhati kemon holo bollen nah j😛
timing dekhe agey seta ullekh korlam.
sotti bolte lekha ta pori nai.
ekbar porte chailam pore vablam j chokhe ghum r mejaj taw akhon ektu kamon jeno so pore tamon 1ta moja pabo na.
kalke pore janabo In Sha Allah.
akhon bolle honest feedback paben na... kalk honest feedback paben asha kori.
Okay thikkase,have a good sleep 😊
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Nice story bro.
Eta ki asole love story naki horror story se bepare ami kinchit confused jodio mone hocche 2tar e mix.
BTW... eta ta ki kono fiction naki apnar e golpo seta bolen nai.
I love to create suspense,hehehe.
Just a fiction, story te narrator married and i am still a baccha pola.
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its good.
you need to break it a bit. otherwise it reads like a essay..
good effort.
Okay i will keep that in mind from the next one.
Thank you dada for the appreciation.I am too much delighted that you took your time to read and gave me a valuable advise.