You've come along way from your first initial works shared here. Looking good so far
But I think some of the English translations are a bit off. I can understand the context but the choice of words need some changing. The word bouncer could be changed to guards as an example.
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The point about my misaligned English has been made before and I'm in the process of working on it.
Next time about the bouncer I will change it to a guard.
Is there any other incorrect English?
Thank you so much🙏