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Done on your page @rlt47

good story, maybe christine forgot, his friend never forget it in silence, but what can be said, cristine has gone, I can only grumble in silence, why cristine too soon to accept his fate, maybe I can become a tonic that menghangantkan, this is just my mind, I forgot that reading your story ...... keep the spirit whatever happened, you are very inspiring

Hi @rlt47, poor cristine can not bear the betrayal, good story, the photo appropriate to the writing.

@rvags - Thank you for the encouragement. I'm glad you enjoyed! :)

@rlt47 Very creative, you are inspiring me to enter in some writing contests. If you can make time I am sure I can too.
ps. copying to HHG6

@teggit - I eagerly await the writer in you to emerge!

Loving the way you have writien sad story about Christine. How do you write these amazing stories? Keep it up@rlt47.

@shanu - Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I love your interpretation of the theme.
I've never been a fan of constraining my writing to one paragraph, so I always skip Foxtales contests.

@jacksondavies - Yeah the theme is always difficult to nail down, so I have some fun with it! I too have a problem with the 1 paragraph set up.

You seem to be doing great despite the limitation.
I hope you win this round.