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RE: The Setup - An Alternative Take III (My Original Short Fiction)

in #story8 years ago

Ahh so it was Vince! The wait was killing me, but I do like the slow burn in terms of the storyline and the posting time. If you were blitzing through this while I was away, I would've had such a tough time catching up. I'm glad I didn't miss a lot. It was worth the wait, too! Though, I apologize for the delayed comment.

Your methodical peeling back of the layers is just so wonderfully executed. I like how you're taking your time fleshing out the characters. The dynamics between the pairings you write seems like they would lend a lot to the overarching story. It's interesting to see how they would crossover to the different pods.

I'm terribly sorry for the delays in my response, I've just been so stumped with everything. I'll try to catch up as soon as I can.

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Hey, my bro! Oh, man! I put this short series together to (not only try to create a new short work) but also highlight the branching pathways that even the simplest of premises can create. I really appreciate you feedback so I know you're a fan of the whole "flashpoint" setting so a thumbs up from you means a great deal to me. Thank you, my brother!

And please, no apology's! Look at the times I've spent away from Steemit! I should be the one saying sorry, man.

Hope everything is going great your end with the wedding prep and all, man. :)

All is forgiven, brother haha! Everything's going good, I wish we had more budget so that I could invite more people, particularly people living on different continents and I only communicate with over the internet wink wink, but the wedding preps are fine.

Glad to hear it, my bro! So happy about that and look forward to hearing all about the build up towards the big day. :)