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RE: In The Shadows. (An Original Poetry)

in Natural Medicine3 years ago

I'm welled up,
with emotions
like a clustered bridge.
stains and tears
in my dreamy eyes
like a canal
flooded by filth,
I need a dose,
to close my eyes
and dream less of this world
cut up in banality

My favorite part of this great poem. You do it so well, I love poetry and literary tragedy. I can tell it came from your heart, in a moment of venting. Thank you for sharing these words.

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Yeah it came from my heart, it was a beautiful moment and quite a nervy one for me. Im a writer that takes advantage of my emotions to create beautiful piecies. Im glad you appreciate this.