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RE: Fiction: The hiding place of some creatures/ El lugar donde se esconden algunas criaturas (ENG/ ESP)

in The Ink Welllast month

This story made me remember the Garden of Eden, the difference being that Eve eating the forbidden fruit did not bring us unparalleled happiness, it brought woes, pains, anguish, agony, and a tiny glimpse of joy that never lasts.

I enjoyed reading, you had a good play with words and your description was on point. I wonder if anyone else will dare to enter the restricted horizon in the future.

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We always see the horizon as that point where there is a lot of hope. Thank you for your comment. Regards