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RE: Forgive me Danny... - The Ink Well Fiction Prompt #108.

in The Ink Welllast year

It seems as if our narrator carries guilt that may not belong to him, yet we can understand why he may feel that the responsibility is his anyhow. What a terribly sad resolution, both for Danny, and our narrator who was just being a typical teenager!

Although you did not quite follow the guidelines of the prompt, you wove a very moving tale here. Thank you for sharing your story with us, and for your engagement with other members of the community.

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Thank you very much for your comment, I will continue to improve my stories.